What POV is during this story? What point, central desire for your subject is most being conveyed?

• Clements advocacy for women and their basic rights and education

• Lack of respect/family to a greater meaning and importance

  • Papa, sister, mamma

 

What dramatic question is organizing the narrative?

• Can you tell us about your experience?

• Why did you have to/decide to leave?

 

Identify 5 central moments/themes that must be included and why?

1. Why they were being targeted

2. The story of Clements escape

3. What him and his wife are doing now to advocate for mistreatment- organization..etc

4. Education for refugees and appropriate placement based on their abilities not their age

 

 

In what order? How will you open the story? Transitions? Close?

1. Brief overview of the conflicts in the congo (timeline)

2. Introduction of Clement

3. Women’s rights in the DRC

4. Their escape

5. Where he is now

6. Advocating for refugees in education/women’s rights